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Victoria Marie Lees's avatar

What an excellent post, Kalpana! I'm with you. I look at my previous stories as a reader. Thinking, how clever the writer was to come up with the story. And them the editor in me starts tweaking sentences and words. Perhaps there should be a better sense of place here. A little more information about a certain character, no matter how minor.

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Alex J. Cavanaugh's avatar

Never wrote Pages or a journal. Like you, I think it would end up being a big mess.

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